how's my driving?

please give me feedback on my portrayal of tiki! characterization critique is useful to have from the canon-familiar, but if you're not, i'd love to hear about things like if my characterization is consistent, if my tags are engaging, if tiki's an interesting character, and if i'm giving you enough to work with.

feel free to also use this as an opt-out post—i know not everyone's into CR with child characters and that's totally okay! i won't be offended if that's just not something you're looking for, please just let me know!

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